雅思寫(xiě)作話題陌生缺論點(diǎn)，表達(dá)匱乏怎么辦?天小編大家?guī)?lái)雅思寫(xiě)作話題陌生缺論點(diǎn),希望能夠幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來(lái)欣賞一下吧。
雅思寫(xiě)作話題陌生缺論點(diǎn)，表達(dá)匱乏怎么辦?
熟悉塔塔的同學(xué)都知道，老師在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)的是英語(yǔ)翻譯專(zhuān)業(yè)，因此花在英語(yǔ)上的時(shí)間一定比看到這篇文章的大多數(shù)同學(xué)要長(zhǎng)得多。
練習(xí)筆譯時(shí)，即使英語(yǔ)不錯(cuò)，也需要辨別兩種語(yǔ)言表達(dá)習(xí)慣上的差異，增強(qiáng)譯文的地道性(有時(shí)候覺(jué)得作為中國(guó)人，受到英語(yǔ)的影響，連中文都不會(huì)說(shuō)了T T);
練習(xí)口譯時(shí)，一遍遍地刷音頻，練筆記，錄音反復(fù)練習(xí)。雖然在畢業(yè)之后并沒(méi)有真的進(jìn)入翻譯的行業(yè)，但是倒陰錯(cuò)陽(yáng)差地幫助到了雅思的教學(xué)。
中式英語(yǔ)是很多中國(guó)學(xué)生在表達(dá)上很大的問(wèn)題，作為比大家更早“受難”的過(guò)來(lái)人，在寫(xiě)作科目教學(xué)中，往往能夠幫助那些不知道怎么減少英語(yǔ)里的塑料感的小朋友指點(diǎn)一條明路。
(Q)班長(zhǎng)代學(xué)生問(wèn)：
塔塔老師，請(qǐng)問(wèn)目前我們中國(guó)雅思考生在備考寫(xiě)作時(shí)普遍存在的問(wèn)題與難點(diǎn)有哪些哇?
難點(diǎn)二：話題陌生缺論點(diǎn)
寫(xiě)作題的另一特點(diǎn)在于豐富的話題類(lèi)型。其中，總有一些話題是你未曾了解的。所以，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候常常會(huì)碰到這樣的情況：遇到熟悉的話題了，尤其是自己專(zhuān)業(yè)相關(guān)的話題，你可以口若懸河、滔滔不絕。一不小心字?jǐn)?shù)就寫(xiě)超了;碰到不了解的問(wèn)題了，一個(gè)字都憋不出來(lái)，恨不得一個(gè)句子同樣的意思寫(xiě)三遍。
既然預(yù)見(jiàn)到了這樣的問(wèn)題，考前必然要及時(shí)應(yīng)對(duì)。十大常考話題中的常見(jiàn)題是肯定要看的，尤其是那些你不夠了解的，更要提前熟悉常用的論點(diǎn)與論據(jù)。對(duì)于自學(xué)的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)，學(xué)習(xí)的主要渠道是真題范文的閱讀與文中語(yǔ)料的積累;而對(duì)于已經(jīng)在上課的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)，任課老師一般都會(huì)將這些語(yǔ)料直接梳理好，配合課后講義以及課上講解的方式直接告訴學(xué)生如何去寫(xiě)。(悄悄告訴大家，塔塔的班課中也有全話題的論點(diǎn)素材以及對(duì)應(yīng)表達(dá)哦!)
難點(diǎn)三：段落安排欠統(tǒng)籌
構(gòu)思好論點(diǎn)之后，下一步就是安排全文的結(jié)構(gòu)了。心中沒(méi)有明確的規(guī)劃，想到哪寫(xiě)到哪的話就容易出現(xiàn)字?jǐn)?shù)不夠或是字?jǐn)?shù)過(guò)多的問(wèn)題，全文邏輯也可能會(huì)不連貫，甚至還有學(xué)生在考場(chǎng)上去數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)。這些全是準(zhǔn)備不足的表現(xiàn)。
要想控制好文章的篇幅其實(shí)一點(diǎn)都不難。
首先，平時(shí)練習(xí)時(shí)就應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成良好的分段習(xí)慣。遇到什么題型應(yīng)該分幾段?每段先寫(xiě)什么、再寫(xiě)什么?需要寫(xiě)幾句能夠恰好滿(mǎn)足考試的字?jǐn)?shù)要求?這些問(wèn)題如果你都胸有成竹的話，那么就可以放心地上考場(chǎng)了。
其次，考試的答題紙?jiān)诰W(wǎng)上都能下載到電子版。考前，同學(xué)們可以將答題紙打印下來(lái)，通過(guò)模考練習(xí)，熟悉答題節(jié)奏，明確自己寫(xiě)到哪一行能夠達(dá)到目標(biāo)字?jǐn)?shù)。
難點(diǎn)四：表達(dá)匱乏無(wú)替換
克服了以上三關(guān)，對(duì)很多學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，最后還有終極的一關(guān)：詞匯語(yǔ)法差。
不針對(duì)自身薄弱點(diǎn)提升語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力，一遍一遍地反復(fù)練習(xí)寫(xiě)作是沒(méi)有意義的，因?yàn)槟阒皇窃谶^(guò)程中不斷地重復(fù)自己的錯(cuò)誤。除了讓錯(cuò)誤的“語(yǔ)感”越來(lái)越強(qiáng)，沒(méi)有任何的好處。
想要有效提升詞匯和語(yǔ)法上的分?jǐn)?shù)，需要通過(guò)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)的訓(xùn)練。
舉一個(gè)例子：Grammatical Range and Accuracy這一項(xiàng)若想達(dá)到6分，除了保證全文的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤數(shù)量低于10個(gè)，必須掌握的句型有簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句。如果一名學(xué)生不能正確使用定語(yǔ)從句，那么他需要做的是先針對(duì)性地學(xué)習(xí)定語(yǔ)從句的相關(guān)用法，再通過(guò)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練，如定語(yǔ)從句漢譯英的句子翻譯練習(xí)來(lái)改善，而不是埋頭做題。
讀了上述四條，你是否更加清楚地認(rèn)識(shí)到了自己現(xiàn)階段離開(kāi)目標(biāo)的距離還有多遠(yuǎn)?考前的焦慮十之八九是由于準(zhǔn)備不夠充分導(dǎo)致的。
與其看著日歷焦慮地計(jì)算離開(kāi)考試還有幾天，不如用合理有效的備考方法早規(guī)劃、勤練習(xí)。在備考群中，小站老師也會(huì)手把手帶著大家從語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)夯實(shí)，到答題技巧解析，幫助同學(xué)們開(kāi)始真正熟悉雅思寫(xiě)作這個(gè)科目。當(dāng)大家做到了這點(diǎn)，原先覺(jué)得很難達(dá)到的目標(biāo)，也會(huì)逐漸變得清晰起來(lái)，伸手就能夠夠到。
塔塔師能給出一些學(xué)習(xí)建議么?
(A)塔塔老師答班長(zhǎng)問(wèn):
很多在備考雅思的學(xué)生都會(huì)在課上或課下問(wèn)塔塔這么一個(gè)問(wèn)題：“寫(xiě)作好難，究竟應(yīng)該怎么準(zhǔn)備?快考試了，完全沒(méi)有頭緒，好著急。”不識(shí)廬山真面目，只緣身在此山中。塔塔今天想要告訴大家，寫(xiě)作本身并沒(méi)有那么難，只要你對(duì)它的難點(diǎn)足夠了解。
寫(xiě)作究竟難在哪?
這要從答題的四個(gè)必經(jīng)步驟說(shuō)起。
難點(diǎn)一：題目要求沒(méi)看懂
雅思寫(xiě)作的難點(diǎn)之一在于多樣的題型。很多自學(xué)的學(xué)生在考前雖然看了很多不同的題目，但是從來(lái)沒(méi)有系統(tǒng)地整理過(guò)一共有幾種出題方式，每一種在答題方式上有什么要求。即使分清楚了題型，在題干分析上也容易忽略細(xì)節(jié)或是誤判關(guān)鍵詞的含義。缺乏技巧的學(xué)習(xí)，帶著錯(cuò)誤的理解去寫(xiě)作，分?jǐn)?shù)自然提不上去，而且這些錯(cuò)誤自己往往都無(wú)法察覺(jué)。(你可以加入劍15備考群，獲取實(shí)用雅思干貨哦)
2017年11月25日雅思寫(xiě)作真題原創(chuàng)高分范文
As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. 隨著城市的快速發(fā)展，年輕人面臨著許多的問(wèn)題，又該如何解決這些問(wèn)題?
1.小站原創(chuàng)雅思范文：
With the relentless march of urbanization in many countries，a string of problems related to young adults who are resident in metropolises should not be ignored. In this essay, the prominent problems and some solutions will be expounded.
Joblessness is widely regarded as one of the primary issues. Nowadays, an increasing number of young people migrate to megacities for convenient life and abundant public resources. However, fierce job competition could also be fueled by this migration and many young people may be afflicted with unemployment. For example, those who fail to possess advanced skills and higher academic qualifications may find it hard to compete in the job market. As there are sometimes hundreds of applicants for one position in a company, young people lacking experience are more likely to be eliminated, resulting in the rising unemployment rate in super-sized cities. What is more, city dwellers’ deteriorating quality of life is attributable to the rapid development of metropolitan cities. Young adults, especially university graduates, lead a hectic life but earn meager wages, which means that under the extremely high cost of living and the shortage of disposable income, houses become unaffordable and unthinkable for them. As a result, the low living satisfaction brings about mental diseases, such as anxiety and depression.
To mitigate the problems, some measures should be taken. Firstly, information about advanced skills should be available to the youth either from the Internet or universities. Meanwhile, young people need to update knowledge so as to improve their employability. Secondly, it is imperative that the government should provide financial incentives for them. For instance, housing and employment subsidies can release young people’s huge economic pressure, which can help them lead a better life.
In conclusion, in order to survive and thrive in metropolises, young people should be well equipped to grapple with above mentioned problems and support from the government could also alter the status quo.
2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)
P1：引入話題+文章寫(xiě)作目的
P2：從兩個(gè)方面論證年輕人面臨的問(wèn)題：就業(yè)難和生活質(zhì)量低
P3：從兩個(gè)角度提出解決方法并和原因一一對(duì)應(yīng)：自我提升，政府補(bǔ)貼
P4：總結(jié)：概括問(wèn)題和方法
3.高分話題表達(dá)
joblessness 失業(yè)
migrate to megacities 移居大城市
be fueled by 被，，激化
be afflicted with 受….折磨
academic qualifications 學(xué)歷
is attributable to 歸因于
lead a hectic life 過(guò)著忙碌的生活
earn meager wages 掙微薄的工資
disposable income 可支配收入
unaffordable and unthinkable 不能負(fù)擔(dān)和不能想象
be available to 對(duì)….可獲得
improve employability 提高就業(yè)能力
financial incentives 財(cái)政激勵(lì)
survive and thrive 生存和發(fā)展
be well equipped 準(zhǔn)備充分
grapple with 努力克服
alter the status quo 改變現(xiàn)狀
4.高分結(jié)構(gòu)
With the relentless march of urbanization 隨著城市化進(jìn)程的不斷推進(jìn)
a string of problems related to…should not be ignored 與….有關(guān)的一系列問(wèn)題不應(yīng)被忽視
fail to possess…. may find it hard to…. 不能掌握….會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)很難…
To mitigate the problems, some measures should be taken. 為了緩解問(wèn)題，應(yīng)該采取一些措施
it is imperative that…..should….. 當(dāng)務(wù)之急是…..
雅思寫(xiě)作大作文滿(mǎn)分范文：保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物(wild animals protection)
雅思寫(xiě)作大作文范文：
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.(269 words, band 9)
相關(guān)雅思寫(xiě)作觀點(diǎn)集： Animal rights
1.Arguments for Animal testing 動(dòng)物實(shí)驗(yàn)論點(diǎn)
Animals are used in important scientific research
It is necessary to do medical tests on new drugs
Animal testing helps to advance medical and scientific knowledge
Many important medical discoveries involved experimentation on animals
Researchers aim to minimize the suffering that animals experience
Testing for the cosmetics industry is now banned in many countrie
2.Arguments against Animal Testing 反對(duì)動(dòng)物實(shí)驗(yàn)
The benefits of research using animals do not justify the suffering caused
There are alternative methods of research
The lives of animals should be respected
Humans have no moral right to do experiments on animals
3.Positives of Zoos 動(dòng)物園的積極作用
Zoos paly an important role in wildlife conservation
They can help to protect endangered species
Zoos allow scientists to study animals and their behavior
Zoos are educational, interesting and fun
Children, in particular, enjoy learning about animals
Zoos provide job opportunities.
4.Negatives of Zoos 動(dòng)物園的消極作用
Zoo animals are kept in artificial environments
They are kept in cages or have limited space
Zoo animals rely on humans
They lose the freedom to hunt for food
They best way to save endangered species is by protecting natural habitats.
Some people believe that zoos are unethical
Zoos exhibits animals with the aim of making money
We have no right to use animals for entertainment and profit.
雅思寫(xiě)作大作文原創(chuàng)高分范文及范文解析
題目是Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development?由于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，現(xiàn)在很多人都不去商店而選擇在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物。那么，這個(gè)趨勢(shì)是好還是壞呢?詳情請(qǐng)看小站原創(chuàng)雅思大作文高分范文及思路詳解。
雅思大作文范文解析:本文屬于社會(huì)生活類(lèi)話題。討論關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物取代實(shí)體購(gòu)物的利弊。考生在思考論點(diǎn)時(shí)應(yīng)該不會(huì)存在困難，畢竟網(wǎng)購(gòu)已經(jīng)成為了現(xiàn)代生活的一部分。但是在處理好處或者壞處的論點(diǎn)時(shí)最好能夠梳理出一個(gè)清晰的層次，例如商家或者買(mǎi)家角度。這樣主體段的思路和論述能更加有條理。
文章結(jié)構(gòu):
paragraph 1 :結(jié)合時(shí)代背景引入話題且表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。
paragraph 2: 論述網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。(分為買(mǎi)家和賣(mài)家兩個(gè)層面)
paragraph 3: 論述網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的缺點(diǎn)。(分為買(mǎi)家和實(shí)體商家兩個(gè)層面)
paragraph 4: 總結(jié)上文論點(diǎn)，強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的觀點(diǎn)以及如何避免缺點(diǎn)。
With the advent of internet, people’s way of shopping has been dramatically changed. Online shopping is thriving and taking the place of shopping in physical shops. Undeniably, both consumers and sellers can benefit from this tendency though several drawbacks can not be underestimated.
From the perspective of vendors, the budget for running business is diminished considerably for the reason that the rent for a shop online is quite cheaper and some are even free of charge; besides, there is no need for them to pay for utility bills. The most advantageous is that their commodities can be introduced to a wider range of people. As long as sellers launch new products, consumers no matter at home or abroad are able to search it by searching engines within seconds. In this case, they are likely to gain huge profits from the high sales of goods. As for buyers, it is achievable to purchase whatever they need without going out. Unlike the past, the only thing they need do is to pick out items and click the button for payment. Furthermore, they may easily compare the price and features of products, as well as find bargains, buying the ideal goods with less cost.
Conversely, there also exist some defects about this shopping pattern. To commence with, it may lead to irrational or excessive consumption. Shopping can be done anywhere at daytime or night, with diverse commodities available from the whole world. Under such circumstance, it is hard for consumers to resist the temptation and easier to buy something failing to meet their real demands. What’s worse, owners of physical stores are facing bankrupt. Statistics show that there were 22 shopping centers closed in Shanghai in the first half year of 2016. The consequent unemployment aggravates the burden on government.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned the boom of online transaction is unstoppable and irreversible and it boosts the prosperity of national economy. In an attempt to avoid unnecessary consumption, shoppers had better think twice before making decisions of purchase. (339 words)
