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備考GRE寫(xiě)作需要注意的問(wèn)題
【從形式上講】
邏輯寫(xiě)作考試包括兩個(gè)不同的部分：
1.Issue task(30min)，要求作者根據(jù)所給題目，完成一篇表明立場(chǎng)的邏輯立論文。
2.Argument task(30min)，要求考生分析所給題目，完成一篇駁論文，指出并且有力的駁斥題目中的主要邏輯錯(cuò)誤。
【從特點(diǎn)上講】
1. GRE寫(xiě)作考試有題庫(kù)：
為了達(dá)到公平，ETS公布了它考試的所有寫(xiě)作題庫(kù)，那么為了達(dá)到能和native speaker一起競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，考生應(yīng)該在考前對(duì)所有題目都進(jìn)行預(yù)習(xí)(節(jié)約考試時(shí)的審題時(shí)間)，并通過(guò)100-150個(gè)提綱的寫(xiě)作了解GRE寫(xiě)作的一般結(jié)構(gòu)，通過(guò)30-50篇寫(xiě)作來(lái)練習(xí)自己的寫(xiě)作思路和表達(dá)。對(duì)題庫(kù)中的題目越熟練，對(duì)考試越有利。
2. GRE寫(xiě)作考試的評(píng)閱是計(jì)件工作制的：
每個(gè)評(píng)卷人對(duì)你文章的評(píng)閱非常快，不可能對(duì)每個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)都很仔細(xì)地去看?？忌鷳?yīng)該迎合評(píng)卷人的評(píng)卷思路，用最規(guī)范的結(jié)構(gòu)和最清晰的表達(dá)來(lái)體現(xiàn)自己的思路：首段要鮮明地提出觀點(diǎn)，中間段落層次要拉開(kāi)，每段的開(kāi)始應(yīng)該就是該段的topic sentence.
3. GRE寫(xiě)作的評(píng)分是整體評(píng)分(holistic scoring)：
首先，從ETS公布的各分?jǐn)?shù)段評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)看，其評(píng)分主要注重以下三個(gè)方面：①、邏輯分析能力(要求insightful);②、文章的組織(要求well-organized);③、語(yǔ)言能力(要求standard written English; concise; varied structure等)。
但是ETS也強(qiáng)調(diào)，評(píng)分是整體的，而不是各個(gè)角度分別評(píng)分。這就說(shuō)明，雖然中國(guó)考生的語(yǔ)言能力偏弱，但是只要能在其他兩個(gè)角度上給評(píng)卷人非常 impressive的感覺(jué)，一樣可以拿到6分。因此，在短期內(nèi)盡力提高語(yǔ)言能力的同時(shí)(語(yǔ)言能力的培養(yǎng)不是一天兩天可以完成的)，我們?cè)趶?fù)習(xí)時(shí)應(yīng)該盡可能地對(duì)題目進(jìn)行深入的分析，學(xué)習(xí)高分作文的文章結(jié)構(gòu)，通過(guò)這兩個(gè)方面的突破來(lái)迅速提高作文整體的分?jǐn)?shù)。
4. GRE寫(xiě)作兩個(gè)部分在總分中的權(quán)重是一樣的：
由于AA的寫(xiě)作不牽涉自己觀點(diǎn)的展開(kāi)，只須指出作者邏輯上的漏洞，因此在經(jīng)過(guò)訓(xùn)練以后，寫(xiě)起來(lái)并不困難;而AI的寫(xiě)作需要自己展開(kāi)自己設(shè)立的觀點(diǎn)，不但需要邏輯上的洞察能力，還需要論證觀點(diǎn)的能力，語(yǔ)言組織的能力，因此對(duì)于中國(guó)考生來(lái)講比較困難，難以短期內(nèi)有較大提高。但是這兩個(gè)部分在總分中的權(quán)重是一樣的，因此考生的策略應(yīng)該是盡量提高AI部分的寫(xiě)作能力而力保AA部分滿分(或高分)。因?yàn)槿绻鸄A部分滿分的話，AI部分只需爭(zhēng)取在4分以上就可以保證整體作文分?jǐn)?shù)在5分以上。
通過(guò)對(duì)以上關(guān)于對(duì)新GRE寫(xiě)作備考信息的解讀，希望各位考生消除懼怕心理，有十足的信心，相信通過(guò)認(rèn)真的備考，同學(xué)們會(huì)取得非常滿意的成績(jī)。
GRE issue寫(xiě)作優(yōu)秀實(shí)例：達(dá)到目標(biāo)的手段
題目：
If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
只要值得，不擇手段達(dá)到目的是合理的。
正文：
The speaker claim that if a goal if worthwhile, then any means taken to achieve this goal is justifiable. Although the assertion makes sense when we consider the underlying of this implication is that whatever the conditions, the natures of the endings deserve our effort wholehearted. But if we examine the broad meaning that this claim carries, we find this threshold statement suffer deficiencies from many aspects of consideration.
First let define the worthiness of a goal. How worthwhile and valuable a goal is lies not only in the subjective meditation and evaluation of an individual, we must consider the interactive influence exerted by this goal on others. For example, a country may consider the goal of achieving economic success and well being of its citizens to be worthwhile, but if we know they exploit cheap labor forces in third-world country,utilize scarce natural resources that being exported from poor countries, or dump low-cost goods in these countries, our morals reveal us the dark side of the goal and make it less worthwhile than it seems to be to its home people. On a personal level, a person’s food might be the others’ poison, so did the goal. Consider the ambition of
Napoleon, his ambitious goal is to conquer the whole European Continent, which considered by himself and many of his follows to be the most glorious plan they have ever made. But by resorting to wars, killings, and blood shedding, their sweet dream turn out to be the nightmare of people habituating in this continent. In a word, since no goal is set from a pure disinterested, impartial perspective, it is necessary to bear the interwoven relationship in mind before targeting at a certain goal. Even if a goal is worthwhile agreed by majority of people, we should consider cost-and-benefit side of things in an effort to obtaining an nonbiased, all-around point of view. Most people today agree that the exploration of outer space is a worthy goal considering the valuable research materials we would get from for our physics and medial experiment and weather forecast. What is more, due to the limit longevity of earth and the ever increasing of populations, we see high calls to find another habitat for our future generations. Even if all the advantages and benefits involved justify the worthiness of this goal, not all means taken would be considered as sensible and judicial. Since most pressing social problem such as AIDS prevention, poverty,environmental problems still in need of immediate attention and observation, we need to allocate most of our resources to tackle these problems. As a result, even if one way of achieving the breakthrough in out space exploration would be to devote all research staff and available resource to this project, we have to struggle a balance between the worthiness of a goal and the proper way to obtain this goal.
The above statement is welcomed and readily embraced by the new trend of practicality since in a society where personal achievement is highly valued, we look more to ending than means. That is to say, people tend to neglect and forgive their own wrongdoings or others’ wrongdoings in a sense that their goals are goodwill–intending and worthwhile. For one thing, for a personal, a society, or even a nation,even they consider things from a totally isolated or functional perspective, no matter how great achievement they obtain, they are selfish losers with nothing to be accomplished from the physiological point of view. In the second place, we observe too many cases where good intention result in total chaos derive not from the dirty tricks they construe but out of the improper means they take. Since the founding of
People’s Republic of China, under the leadership of Chairman Mao, China has undergone a reform in the area of economy, which is to implement planned economy. Mao’s intention is good, and his goal is to realize communalisms in this new country to short its economic gap with the western country in the shortest as possible. But without considering the properness of this means from the economic and social point of view, he threw china into years of economic regression and stillness. Ideas went contrary to our wills and intentions occasionally and thus make the consideration and full analyzes of the means to obtaining goals even pressing.
To sum up, I am against the speaker’s assertion since he neglects one important aspect of how to evaluate goals. To devote to a worth goal is justifiable and the effort instilled in this process deserve our accolade since it is always this power that push the society forward. But by neglecting the means of how to obtain these goals, we put ourselves in an embarrassing place of functionalists and opportunists. As a result, it is highly resulted to look from different perspectives to figure our where the true value of a goal lies and how to achieve it.
GRE 寫(xiě)作優(yōu)秀實(shí)例：孩子整體和局部的發(fā)展
題目：
Society should identify those children who have special talents and abilities and begin training them at an early age so that they can eventually excel in their areas of ability. Otherwise, these talents are likely to remain undeveloped.
社會(huì)應(yīng)該發(fā)現(xiàn)那些具有特殊天賦和能力的孩子，并且在年幼的時(shí)候就開(kāi)始訓(xùn)練他們以便于這些孩子最終可以在他們擅長(zhǎng)的領(lǐng)域中出類拔萃。否則這些天才就可能會(huì)止步不前。
正文：
I strongly agree with the author on the claim that gifted children should be identified and provided special education. Since such training can help better develop talented individual and greatly benefit the whole society, it is necessary to put this proposal into reality as soon as possible.
Both theoretical studies and experimental practices have indicated that gifted children would better develop themselves under circumstances specially designed for them.Starting with the observation of extraordinary children, teachers from kindergartens and elementary schools have long been reporting their being obsessed with certain "troublesome" kids by their unique behavioral patterns. For example, while the whole class is learning basic arithmetic such as twelve plus thirteen is twenty-five, a math whiz, exercising multiplication on 4-digit numbers without awareness of what's going on in the classroom, may always draw the teacher's attention. So it is very often a headache for the teachers in that to punish this committed kid for not being attentive is so unreasonable. Actually letting him/her to stay in this class is an unreasonable thing itself since what is taught is far behind what is wanted. Hence the solution is to set up a special class or institution for all kids of this kind. I came to know one of these classes in China which mainly aims at academically promising stars. Some thirty talented children of ten years old from elementary schools are enrolled every two years and they will be sent to universities in various majors at the age of fourteen,since they are capable of learning much more and much faster. That is to say ------take the chemistry major as an example ------ some of them will be doing experiments in university chemistry curriculum with ease while others of the same age find it painful to understand the composition of water. It makes a great difference once their potentials are fully developed. Therefore one can see the necessity in providing the talented such institutions as the genuine nourishment they need.
Moreover, these specialized institutions are capable of preventing some unpleasant consequences. Needless to say without these institutions we will miss the chance to produce numerous experts on various fields, or at least their debuts have to be postponed. More importantly, the unbalanced development, that is indulgence in their field of interest and disregard on others, is a commonplace among gifted children. A young math whiz may find it hard to ask for direction when lost his/her way since he/she is poor at communication. Or a young poet with personality flaws frequently complains for his/her absurd demands not being fulfilled. This problem is particularly conspicuous in that they are unexpectedly superior in one field yet unbearably inferior in another. In this case, gifted children's class can better afford solutions than ordinary ones as their experts on psychology can put more emphasis on these points, while ordinary school teachers tend to overlook such problems. In these classes it is far more convenient to make distinct therapy for individual on his/her own drawbacks, and produce genius with personality well-being and other necessary living skills. Thus the specialized institutions yield experts but not maniacs, which is a very satisfying outcome.
Last but not the least, establishment of these institutions is beneficial to the society.These kids with special training will generally work at an early age, and therefore produce more wealth for the society. Teenage university graduates can best support this thesis. The society spend less on their education yet gets back more once they get a job. Also it has been found out that people are usually more creative in their youth,as we recall those prominent figures like Goethe, or Mozart, or Einstein. On the behalf of the society it is advantageous for the talented spend his/her youth on research than on education. Therefore we can expect more inventions from them, be they scientific theory or painting masterpiece. Eventually we see how wise it is to invest in the special training programs.
In conclusion, I believe identification and special education for gifted children is necessary for the society. These projects should be carried out without hesitation, and the society will find it a strikingly wise decision as the talented make contributions in all aspects of life.
